Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
Excess population in cities has resulted in various issues. The two main problems that are caused by over population are exploitation of labor that migrates to the cities and the strain that the surplus people cause on the cities' infrastructure and resources.
These problems can be dealt with at individual as well as government levels.
One of the reasons of overpopulation of the cities is due to lack of employment opportunities in smaller towns , therefore people migrate to urban areas in search of better avenues for work and trade. As a result of which there is more supply of labor in the larger towns, which leads to their exploitation at the hands of capitalists. Firstly, the government needs to resolve the problem of overcrowding of the urban areas itself, by developing adjacent suburban areas by means of industrialization that can provide a good source of living to the masses living in the smaller towns so that they are not required to migrate.
The surplus population has an adverse effect on the resources of the city, for example, overcrowded cities such as Mumbai face acute shortage of water and face frequent water cuts. To attempt to resolve this at an individual level, each one of us needs to use these resources responsibly and ensure to reduce wastage.
To conclude, overpopulation of the urban areas does led to many difficulties, namely exploitation of cheap migrant labor and strain on the resources of the city. Efforts of both the government and the individuals are required to order to deal with these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: dealing
...d the individuals are required to order to deal with these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05019305019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95674937455 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521235521236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3897507372 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.8 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254254899475 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928846766858 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070529856694 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137359746716 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692057548894 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.