In the past culture and history were stored in the museum. But now people can use the internet to see them freely, so do we need museums in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is in the museum where the history is always kept, protected and preserved, antiques from the bygone days which the people come and visit to have an idea how our ancestors lived and survived in the nature. By the introduction of internet, people nowadays are not keen to seek the interest of visiting a museum, the internet has made it possible to have a glimpse of the culture and tradition in a press of a button. Though the internet brings information to the people of society, it does not mean that the museums are not needed in the future.
Children, who are fond of seeking information are the main reason where history should be preserved for. Most of the things that they learn in their primary education is always truly dependent on the history of mankind. A live demonstration of the part where so many people have spend their valuable time and hard work is showcased in the museum, for, the children and adults who want to have the feeling of culture that made percent day world a perfect place to live.
The promotion of tourism along with the help of government bodies are being followed around the world from the beginning of the globalisation. The internet being the prime factor of an individual, nowadays, can only show the images or the video clips in a cheaper and more efficient way for the ones who depend to know only a slice of the history presented on a museum. But feel and experience that we get while having the view my eyes, which is right in front of us cannot be outmatched by the internet. Future is always unpredictable, depending the internet can may give people information needed, the real life experience cannot be felt.
In conclusion, the internet changed the world a lot but there are limitations for it, the magnificent feel and experience to know more about our history from a museum is always a must do thing for the days to come, for the generations we preserve.
- In the past culture and history were stored in the museum But now people can use the internet to see them freely so do we need museums in the future To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Leisure is a growing industry nowadays more modern technology is used in entertainment which lead people to be less creative do you agree or disagree State your views with examples 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...n of the part where so many people have spend their valuable time and hard work is sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64117647059 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60044579622 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7586113765 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9090909091 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210960318865 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813990540169 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495008543477 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129449040309 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400122114829 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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