With the technology implementation, we have changed the way to keep our knowledge. Previously we used to have thick books and now we save everything over the internet. This change has lots of advantages but there are some disadvantages too.
Saving the knowledge over the internet has one big disadvantage, that is loss of data. If we save something on internet it basically saved in some server, and by any chance if there is any damage to a server then there are high changes that one should loose the data. As a security measure also it is not recommendable to save the data on internet, specially if those are sensitive bank details. Some time hackers ,get the bank details through get into the server illegally and it will be a bog loss for a person. It is mandatory to have a high security fire system attached to the server.
On the other hand we can see the one very useful advantage, if we keep the details in internet that it is very easy to access. Whenever we want to have the details we just need to go to the internet and have them. Whether we need it for business meeting or want to read during the travel time, always it is available. One more thing that it is easy to share also. we just need to send the link or email to a other person and job is done. It used to take days if we want to share the book with some other person who stays altogether is a different city.
In conclusion, I feel that having your knowledge over the internet is a advance technology and having lots of advantage, whereas we need to make sure that, advance safety measures has been taken up.
- In the past, people like to store knowledge in books. At present, we like to store on the internet. Do you think advantages out-weight the disadvantages? 61
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... there are high changes that one should loose the data. As a security measure also it...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ensitive bank details. Some time hackers ,get the bank details through get into th...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...One more thing that it is easy to share also. we just need to send the link or email...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...re thing that it is easy to share also. we just need to send the link or email to ...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... just need to send the link or email to a other person and job is done. It used t...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing your knowledge over the internet is a advance technology and having lots of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40878378378 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50348323813 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7741401192 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118563325509 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459707848165 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322490648415 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791049640957 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242876006376 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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