In earlier times, people were depended on television news broadcast and newspapers as those were the only medium of news available then whereas now, we have moved to other options available on the internet. One of these are social media platforms where news updates are available by way of posts and tags. In fact, these platforms are widely accepted by the present generation as everyone is active on some or the other social media channel. In addition to this, there are several app’s available on our mobile phones which give us latest news anytime, anywhere. Moreover, various news channels have their own websites where all the live news updates are available on a click.
Further to this, these options have been accepted globally and have been favorable for all age groups. Easily accessible news has saved a lot of time as well as been very cost-effective. Additionally, nowadays, news channels no longer show quality news, but all other irrelevant information as news. Although internet has made news easily accessible, it has several negative impacts too. If not referred to the correct website, one can get wrong misleading news. Since internet gives access to express anything, some people use this medium to release fake information hereby creating confusion. Also, it is difficult to understand what news on the internet is true and reliable and what is wrongly manipulated.
- You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country Write a letter to your Facebook friend In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are inter 89
- A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him in his country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write a letter to your friend In your letter request advice about a gift for his her family ask about activi 71
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places 69
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realized you had left your wallet there Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thanks your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house give them in 73
- Your family is going to move to another town Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 482, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'apps'?
Suggestion: apps
... In addition to this, there are several app’s available on our mobile phones which ...
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Line 1, column 530, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'us the latest'.
Suggestion: us the latest
...ailable on our mobile phones which give us latest news anytime, anywhere. Moreover, vario...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...s updates are available on a click. Further to this, these options have been accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, in addition, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14977973568 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64370772834 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616740088106 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8451755294 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26835502688 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102082114415 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603748046979 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2142956823 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345254780683 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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