People generating lot of trash these days. What are the causes and solutions.
In modern days, we, humans, emitting trash more than ever before. While certainly there are numerous reasons for this trend, the ever-rising emission of scrap can be curbed by performing various steps.
To begin with, the prime reason of excessive waste is the consumption of non-recyclable products which has been escalated from last century as the main source of packaging for most of the products is plastic such as, packaged meal, milk, oils, drinks and much more. Even though there are various substitutes are available to use for the shopping, it seems that the people, as well as shopkeeper, still tend to use plastic bags. Another reason for this trend is the unmanaged waste management system as in many countries, still, the government do not have appropriate resources to collect, and recycle the waste in a systematic manner. Not only this but also, the people are unaware of the dire impact of this situation. As a result, they are just dumping it on the roads or random isolated places which are barely being monitored by the authorities.
On the other hand, the most effective way to handle the garbage is to have established a system to recycle garbage as the government must provide containers to store and collect trash and also, make sure that there are plenty of waste management plants to process it. Another solution to this dilemma is to educate the people on the dreadful outcome of dumping the trash here and there. To cite an example here, in India, the administration has initiated a trash segregation campaign in various places to spread awareness on the benefits of segregating and recycling waste.
In conclusion, although the proportion of waste produced by us has increased dramatically in the recent years, the modern ways of handling waste and disseminating awareness on the use of reusable items among people are the ultimate ways to dwindle this critical situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic manner" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...urces to collect, and recycle the waste in a systematic manner. Not only this but also, the people are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04731861199 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72560681683 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3708006689 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767682132288 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034833331585 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414377586868 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504494089084 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028476879475 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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