People living in the 21st century have a great quality of life than the previous centuries. Agree or disagree?
It is undeniable fact that in the modern world, people are living a tremendous life as compared to the previous centuries. While an increasing number of people believe that the life of past people was more peaceful. However, i am strongly convinced with the statement that today people are living a higher standard of life and this will be further analysed to demonstrate points and support arguments.
On the one hand, advocates of this statement argue that job opportunities have increased. As an illustration, survey in this area invariably reveals that youngsters can get innumerable opportunities in job sectors. Furthermore, it can be elaborated that people can get a higher level of education. There is ample evidence to suggest that due to the competition at education level, there is an improvement in life skills, social and cognitive skills and life experience.
On the other hand, opposers of this statement claim that the reason why the life of previous centuries was good because of the peaceful atmosphere. For example, it is widely acknowledged that these days criminal activities have increased. In addition, the invention of various technologies have made the air polluted. Hence, people are becoming sick due to diseases.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the invention of various technologies has risen many problems, however, the above analysis has provided the crucial information to believe in the fact that people have a great quality of life in the 21st century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as compared to the previous centuries. While an increasing number of people believe ...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...past people was more peaceful. However, i am strongly convinced with the statemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24066390041 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97148746926 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3075092004 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299525693747 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951285718985 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732993112564 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16975250296 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065493147957 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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