A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It’s irrefutable that maintaining a good level of healthy life is in somehow a personal decision. However, the question of whether the government’s responsibility is to take care of people health care life is very arguable issue. In my point of view, I think it’s a synergistic relationship between individuals and their local authority. This essay aims to explore such a significant issue in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, undoubtedly, human being have their own right to pass any direction that they believe it’s more healthier or suitable for their lives. For instance, government may impose very high taxes on certain products such as cigarette as a convincing method to quit such a bad habit, but it’s illegal to force people to do so. In contrast, sufficient investments by government might lead to have a high quality medical system. For example, the USA has allocate an annual budget for the Ministry Of health, in terms of enhancing hospitals’ infrastructure such as inventing new drugs, overcome some rare diseases, or constructing a number of hospitals and clinical centers especially in rural places. This actions indeed have a great impact on preserving people healthy life.
Moreover, in order to keep high healthy level among all individuals, government should provide such vital facility free of charge or with extremely low fees. To illustrate, a plethora of poor individuals who are under the poverty line in many developing nations where the medical care is very luxurious and expensive services, they have no choice except trying some herbals instead of medicines because of it’s unaffordable for them. Finally, governments should take their responsible against their citizens and increase their awareness about the healthier life. Since authorities have the capabilities to distribute reliable medical advises to people in various channels such as social media platforms. This moves are playing a pivotal role in correcting people lifestyle.
To sum up, in spite of following a healthy life is a personal decision, governments responsible to ease such essential services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...n somehow a personal decision. However, the question of whether the government's responsibility is...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...y direction that they believe it's more healthier or suitable for their lives. For instan...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'allocated'.
Suggestion: allocated
...edical system. For example, the USA has allocate an annual budget for the Ministry Of he...
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Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...cal centers especially in rural places. This actions indeed have a great impact on p...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsible to ease such essential services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, such as, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06849712452 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627976190476 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9890336226 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.266666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228304558923 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746896997824 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468432338956 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142357675 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409702484334 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.