There are many physical exercises people should engage in so that the body will be in good shape while experiencing daily growth. In all schools, physical education and sports should be made compulsory for all students. However, as per my belief, it is expedient that all students participate in sports, as long as they are not handicapped. In this essay I will discuss how students will benefit from their participation in physical education and the advantages students will have participating in sports
To begin with, students will stay fit and healthy after daily physical education engagements. For instance, when students participate in aerobics, a good level of fitness is maintained; students become healthier. Similarly, a person's mood becomes brighter whenever there is engagement in activities such as physical education, so students will enjoy the benefits. Therefore, it is clear that students will stay fit and healthy as they engage in physical education.
To continue, there are many advantages a student will have once they get involved in sports. Let us take a look at a few examples. Because of a student's early participation in sports, a very successful professional career can be achieved. In addition, a student becomes a very athletic person when there is evidence of participation in school sports. Thus, it is expedient for students to get themselves involved in sports so that they can reap the advantages that comes with it.
In this essay I have discussed the advantages of participation in physical education and the advantages of participation in sports.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27559055118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07565747757 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484251968504 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0727998232 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296107326866 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116667896905 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117978833711 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180047866568 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101263023872 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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