Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Generally people adopt different passion and liking over a period of time. For some people this variation is not due to individual choices but merely impression of new lifestyle. To a certain extent, i would agree with the statement , but there are some new activities people follow because they like it.
On the one hand, people changes their area of interest due to recent trends in their surroundings They want to keep themselves up to date and want to get an attention from others with their novel activities. For example , Some people start showing interest in things like hiking , sky diving , tracking so as to show they are tough people.
On the other hand ,people may choose new activities as they haven't tried or think of it before. These activities are might be in the trend but they are following only due to their inclination towards it.
In conclusion, though it is a fact that person change his hobbies and passions over a time but its not necessary due to the recent fashions, it may be the new options available with him as encouraged him to try new things.
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Essay evaluation report
people changes their area of interest
people change their area of interest
These activities are might be in the trend
These activities might be in the trend
though it is a fact that person change his hobbies and passions over a time but its not necessary
Description: don't put 'though' 'but' in one sentence.
Sentence: In conclusion, though it is a fact that person change his hobbies and passions over a time but its not necessary due to the recent fashions, it may be the new options available with him as encouraged him to try new things.
Description: The fragment person change his is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace change with verb, past tense
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to its and not
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 190 350 //Minimum 250 words wanted.
a lot of 'due to'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 190 350
No. of Characters: 862 1500
No. of Different Words: 115 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.713 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.537 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.442 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.64 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.713 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...opt different passion and liking over a period of time. For some people this variation is not ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of new lifestyle. To a certain extent, i would agree with the statement , but th...
^
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...extent, i would agree with the statement , but there are some new activities peopl...
^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with their novel activities. For example , Some people start showing interest in t...
^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t showing interest in things like hiking , sky diving , tracking so as to show the...
^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...howing interest in things like hiking , sky diving , tracking so as to show they are tough...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...erest in things like hiking , sky diving , tracking so as to show they are tough p...
^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ngs like hiking , sky diving , tracking so as to show they are tough people. On the o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y are tough people. On the other hand ,people may choose new activities as they...
^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...eople may choose new activities as they havent tried or think of it before. These acti...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223300970874 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.145631067961 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0922330097087 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0339805825243 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0922330097087 0.0437548338989 211% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131067961165 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0194174757282 0.0403226058552 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.52005300182 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0485436893204 0.0326793684256 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00485436893204 0.00163938923432 296% => OK
Determiners: 0.0776699029126 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194174757282 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1080.0 1933.35771543 56% => OK
No of words: 193.0 316.048096192 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59585492228 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20517956788 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316062176166 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20725388601 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129533678756 0.203846283523 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108808290155 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52005300182 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.037074148 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 58.8840140771 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0891783567 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 24.125 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9574819221 49.517814964 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.850388601 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.375 1.69124875643 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275504247691 0.332605444948 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121694592373 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0342660724655 0.0668466124924 51% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.675426977513 0.534860350844 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162315589687 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131876054858 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736323789523 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.265170274021 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0234510371771 0.0638462369009 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177894540723 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055706103071 0.058150111329 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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