Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , interest
Everyone have their own hobbies,interest and personal life. However,sometimes pe...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sometimes
...bies,interest and personal life. However,sometimes personal interest influenced by trends ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...al interest or hobbies mostly impact on individuals life rather than fashion or trends. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...life rather than fashion or trends. first of all,the world is now global village....
^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...than fashion or trends. first of all,the world is now global village. Global tre...
^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fashion
...orld is now global village. Global trend,fashion or lifestyle easily enter to our cultur...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , internet
...le easily enter to our culture. Moreover,internet is as cheap as everyone can access it. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
... everyone can access it. That's why,people can easily gain knowledge about others ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fashions
...sily gain knowledge about others culture,fashions or trends. Moreover,internet reduce the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , internet
...ers culture,fashions or trends. Moreover,internet reduce the boundaries of age,culture or...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , culture
...er,internet reduce the boundaries of age,culture or tradition. For instance,my father ca...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...f age,culture or tradition. For instance,my father can use internet. He always try ...
^^^
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...e,my father can use internet. He always try to update himself by new fashion,trend ...
^^^
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , trend
...ays try to update himself by new fashion,trend or tradition with global aspect. But in...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...nd or tradition with global aspect. But in past,he always try to read new books,journal...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...radition with global aspect. But in past,he always try to read new books,journal or...
^^^
Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...th global aspect. But in past,he always try to read new books,journal or gossip wit...
^^^
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , journal
... in past,he always try to read new books,journal or gossip with his close friends. Peopl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 713, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...ow following global fashion. For example,in my childhood,i always play cricket,foot...
^^^
Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...bal fashion. For example,in my childhood,i always play cricket,football or other s...
^^
Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , football
...le,in my childhood,i always play cricket,football or other sports. But now,i spend most o...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 785, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...ricket,football or other sports. But now,i spend most of the time in social media....
^^
Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...icket,football or other sports. But now,i spend most of the time in social media....
^
Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd most of the time in social media. If i think,there have no social media or com...
^
Line 3, column 838, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... of the time in social media. If i think,there have no social media or communication a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 886, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
...ave no social media or communication app,then i always try to spend my spare time to ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 954, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my spare time to read books. That means i am also following global trends rather ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ends rather than personal interest. on the other hand, people also emphasize o...
^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , playing
...ove to play sports. But in global trends,playing sports are concise by smartphone. We ar...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reading
...y sports in our smartphones. Furthermore,reading books also popular in most cultures. We...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...onal interest remained same. For example,one of my aunt's hobby is to read book...
^^^^
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tly and not efficient to carry. One day i suggest him to read books on smartphone...
^
Line 5, column 610, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...to read books on smartphone. In addition,i installed an app to read books on her s...
^^
Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o read books on smartphone. In addition,i installed an app to read books on her s...
^
Line 5, column 685, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , personal
...n her smartphone. Here we can learn that,personal interest reflected but way is different...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...est reflected but way is different. in a nutshell,global trends influence a pe...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , global
... but way is different. in a nutshell,global trends influence a person for a while,b...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...al trends influence a person for a while,but it not reflected whole of life.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, in most cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35347432024 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34381723745 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525679758308 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.43456067 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.375 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.34375 20.7667163134 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151965731395 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399762981426 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370090648406 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953730419217 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036017743025 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.