The line graph compares the average yearly spending on cell phone and residential phone services over a period of 9 years,from 2001 to 2010.
It is clear that the annual expenditure of both services shown as opposite direction.Cellphone services increase gradually,whereas residential phone services decrease as well as.
In 2001,Us consumer spend around700 dollar on residential phone services,compared to only 200 dollar on cell phone services.Residential phone services shown as downward trend.By contrast,Cell phone service expenditure increase gradually throughout the period.In 2002,Over 300 dollar spend on residential phone services,whereas 600 dollar on cell phone services and that was three times higher.
In 2006,Cellphone and residential phone services shown as same amount,that was around 500 dollar.After 2006,cellphone services went up steadily,whereas cell phone services went up as well as.in 2010,Cell phone services reached at peak and it was around 750 dollar.On the other hand that was about 400 dollar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
... phone services over a period of 9 years,from 2001 to 2010. It is clear that the a...
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Suggestion: Cellphone
...th services shown as opposite direction.Cellphone services increase gradually,whereas res...
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Suggestion: , whereas
...on.Cellphone services increase gradually,whereas residential phone services decrease as ...
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Suggestion: , compared
...700 dollar on residential phone services,compared to only 200 dollar on cell phone servic...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ial phone services,compared to only 200 dollar on cell phone services.Residential phon...
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Suggestion: Residential
... only 200 dollar on cell phone services.Residential phone services shown as downward trend....
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... phone services shown as downward trend.By contrast,Cell phone service expenditure...
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...ices shown as downward trend.By contrast,Cell phone service expenditure increase grad...
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...ncrease gradually throughout the period.In 2002,Over 300 dollar spend on residenti...
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Suggestion: dollars
... throughout the period.In 2002,Over 300 dollar spend on residential phone services,whe...
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Suggestion: , whereas
...llar spend on residential phone services,whereas 600 dollar on cell phone services and t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... residential phone services,whereas 600 dollar on cell phone services and that was thr...
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Suggestion: , that
...tial phone services shown as same amount,that was around 500 dollar.After 2006,cellph...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...hown as same amount,that was around 500 dollar.After 2006,cellphone services went up s...
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Suggestion: After
... same amount,that was around 500 dollar.After 2006,cellphone services went up steadil...
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Suggestion: , whereas
...2006,cellphone services went up steadily,whereas cell phone services went up as well as....
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Suggestion: dollars
...s reached at peak and it was around 750 dollar.On the other hand that was about 400 do...
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Suggestion: On
...ed at peak and it was around 750 dollar.On the other hand that was about 400 dolla...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ar.On the other hand that was about 400 dollar.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99324324324 4.92477711251 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73972295197 2.65546596893 141% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.250617282 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.75 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.521194107607 0.215688989381 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.357836112919 0.103423049105 346% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671625945524 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357836112919 0.15604864568 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671625945524 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.2329268293 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 11.4140731707 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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