The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , it
... hydroelectric power station. Overall,it is a man made process with several stag...
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Suggestion: , it
... or night. Closer look to the diagram,it starts with river water that stores on ...
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Suggestion: Bottom
...ter that stores on high level reservoir.Bottom of the dam,there have an intake that co...
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Suggestion: , there
...n high level reservoir.Bottom of the dam,there have an intake that control flows of wa...
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Suggestion: , it
...ntake that control flows of water.in day,it opens and produce electricity by flow o...
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Suggestion: , reversible
...of water work as pumping. Furthermore,reversible turbines connected to generator and low...
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Suggestion: Day
...vel reservoir and stock for further use.Day shift it work as pump water into high l...
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Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
... and stock for further use.Day shift it work as pump water into high level reservoir...
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Suggestion: Passing
...as pump water into high level reservoir.Passing water through turbines and force of wat...
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Suggestion: The
...run the generator that make electricity.The electricity pass through long distance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48101265823 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24337294093 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.314638223 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.5 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981844085319 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981861755647 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984741573069 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981861755647 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984741573069 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.