The Position of women in society has changed markedly in last 20 years. many of problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Women empowerment and employment have greatly increased from last twenty years. It is a positive development for the entire nation but it well said that, "Every good thing has its darker sides" just like that women employment gives birth to serious issues of youngsters such as juvenile delinquency. In this essay, I shall mention some accurate reasons of it by giving some relevant examples.
Elucidating in detail, women empowerment has many benefits but it is a double-edged blade which has to be used with extreme caution. Firstly, it is the prime responsibility of parent to bringing their child with etiquette but unfortunately, in these current days, both mother and father are working to lead a comfortable and happy life, therefore they can not spend enough time with their wards. This is the prime reason of juvenile delinquency. For example, in the absence of parents, children takes drugs, alcohol as well as they do smoke. In short, they go astray in the regent of their parents. Secondly, nowadays all parents fulfill the each and every demands of their offspring which increases the rate of juvenile delinquency. Even today`s parents give pocket money to their children and there is no assurance that they use that money on proper way.
However, in the past only fathers went to market for earning daily bread-butter for their family and mother brought up their children by stay at home only, hence on those days, there were not any single crime of youngsters has reported. In addition to this, nowadays most of the women are working as well as they acknowledge to live in nuclear family, so they have to keep their wards alone at home which invites crimes at an early age of children.
To recapitulate, by preserving all these above arguments in my mind, I can pen down saying that women employment has given birth to juvenile delinquency and there is only one solution of this issue and that is, women should stay at home for looking after their children up to some period. It is my idiosyncratic notion which might be applicable to all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
...reported. In addition to this, nowadays most of women are working as well as they acknowledge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94857142857 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76937184361 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2040268943 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252897141382 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819761985891 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492830679055 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144880065248 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110999514466 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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