Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The advancement in health, education and trade activities are necessary for the growth of a country. Nevertheless, the government of developed country should provide support to under privileged nation in these sectors. In my opinion, I do believe that supporting the poor countries will
The underdeveloped countries lack the proper facilities of providing health care system, optimum education and a proper trade and exchange system. They lack the necessary resources and funds to allocated in these sectors. As a result, not only the literacy rate is low but also people suffer from illness for which no cure is available to them. Moreover, there is depression in the economy as the commerce, business and finance sectors is not very strong. In the end, people live a miserable life not able to meet their basic necessities and thus, indulge in illegal and criminal activities.
However, I believe, the government of the developed countries should take up the responsibility to provide support to poor countries in terms of providing finance and resources. They should provide them with the latest and up-to-date medical facilities and trained doctors which helps them to cure their dieses. Moreover, schools and colleges should be constructed and people should be motivated to study and enhance their knowledge and skills. Furthermore, the trade and business sector should be enhanced by opening multi-national companies and exchanging goods and services, to ensure that not only there is financial influx but also the employment rate in increasing.
In my opinion, I strongly agree that the political party in power of a developed country should provide financial and social assistance to the needy and disadvantaged countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that supporting the poor countries will The underdeveloped countries lack the pr...
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Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...a miserable life not able to meet their basic necessities and thus, indulge in illegal and crimin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40073529412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94583959384 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.512794665 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171321443158 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062706544615 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524936984676 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104431617545 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483686910385 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.