Prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extent do you agree?
We live in an era of technology, be it in a medical field or engineering. Government uses outstanding technological advancements to perform diagnosis and cure the illness. However, in my opinion, I strongly believe that a part of the government funding should be dedicatedly used for prevention of various diseases. Following paragraphs will elaborate my opinion in broader way.
Admittedly, it is important to reserve a sufficient amount of funding for medical research and treatments. Because of this financial support from the government scientists have now invented many useful medicines that can be used to cure various life threatening illnesses which were thought to be incurable prior to a couple of decades. According to a survey conducted by World Health Organization (WHO), newly developed medicines for cancer treatment provides 76% of chance for patients to recover in full health. Therefore, it is indeed crucial to invest in medical researches.
However, because of less awareness about health and other bad habits people suffer from many health issues in the first place. If people were more concerned about their own well-being, this issue could have been avoided to a noticeable extent. The government should invest more in gyms, yoga centers and also organise fitness camps to spread awareness. Furthermore, dietary supplements which are rich in vitamins and other nutritious minerals should be made available to public at cheaper costs. Hence, people of all class can afford it.
In conclusion, it is indeed vital to invest in treatments and medicines, however, it would be more beneficial if government could spend a sufficient amount of money in preventing the diseases by making people conscious about their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng for medical research and treatments. Because of this financial support from the gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40293040293 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95400749603 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0712050773 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217936916362 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613008812462 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478837421829 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123937481813 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226648865418 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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