Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis.The metro is the most convenient way to get around the city. Do youagree or disagree?

With the advancement of technology, world moving yo different world . Public transpart is one of invevtion made by human. some people believe that public transport is a great source to travel whrreas other say metro os most convenient way to move around the large cities.I do agree with the statement.

there, no doubt, that pravite vehicles provide confortable. nevertheless, becouse of it couse pollution and traffic jam. whereas promoting public transport means mitigate in pollution and traffic jam and noise pollution. for instance , in many counties public tansport is used more than private vehicles to make pollution free environment.

undoubtly, the metro is a most convenient way to get around the cities with any traffic jam. like underground trains.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
With the advancement of technology, world moving yo different world . Public...
^^
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nology, world moving yo different world . Public transpart is one of invevtion ma...
^^
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...part is one of invevtion made by human. some people believe that public transport is...
^^^^
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s most convenient way to move around the large cities.I do agree with the stateme...
^^
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nt way to move around the large cities.I do agree with the statement. there, ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ities.I do agree with the statement. there, no doubt, that pravite vehicles provi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there, no doubt, that pravite vehicles provide confortable. nevertheless, becou...
^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
... pravite vehicles provide confortable. nevertheless, becouse of it couse pollution and traf...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
... of it couse pollution and traffic jam. whereas promoting public transport means mitiga...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...on and traffic jam and noise pollution. for instance , in many counties public tans...
^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ic jam and noise pollution. for instance , in many counties public tansport is use...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtly
... to make pollution free environment. undoubtly, the metro is a most convenient way to...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...btly, the metro is a most convenient way to get around the cities with any traffi...
^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...around the cities with any traffic jam. like underground trains.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, whereas, for instance, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 315.596192385 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43697478992 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82907905027 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72268907563 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0953579466 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2222222222 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266180023187 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858044995655 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123594591594 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183883815464 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962580988499 0.056905535591 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.