Question: Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter
. Describe the problem
. say how long it has been a problem.
. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take
Dear Mr. Mate,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the spilled garbage from your apartment into my apartment.
In every morning, we find the piece of foods at balcony and we are really fed-up cleaning the same repeatedly. Initially we thought that birds or mouse might be leaving the food in my balcony but my wife informed me last Sunday that some your family members throw the food openly in garden area of the apartment and sometime times it fell in my balcony as well.
We have been experiencing this problem for last two months and in fact I made a complaint to estate manger about the incident last month and requested to search the responsible person. Though, estate manager observed the premises, could not find the cause as he work in day hours and I believe that some of your family members might be littering it in dawn.
Since this is a grave violation of apartment norms, I would request you to take immediate action. First of all, you may instruct your family members to not to waste any food as it causes unhygienic environment in society. Also, all the litters should be placed in right bin box so those municipal departments process it properly. In addition, all the electronic waste should not be placed in bin at any cost as it may cause blast if exposed to sun-light.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
TOM Brook
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: MANGER_MANAGER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'estate manager'?
Suggestion: estate manager
...onths and in fact I made a complaint to estate manger about the incident last month and reque...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely TOM Brook
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, so, well, in addition, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62448979592 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43979911914 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608163265306 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7735395728 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137198495417 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543481677563 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468501124744 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751463762394 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515452986953 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.