Reading fiction books, such as short stories and novels is more fun than watching motion pictures. Do you agree or disagree?
Amidst the hustle and bustle of life, where every human being is running a mad rat race to earn money, entertainment is the need of the hour. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-32B023C1421D9ACA087C5B21CF16A556" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_640" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: To" data-pwa-suggestions="To" data-pwa-dictionary-word="In order to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">In order to</pwa> rejuvenate oneself and reconstruct the energy, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AE62B39ED75E23C55DABD13FCBAADB80" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I look any form of recreation~we look any form of recreation~it looks any form of recreation~they look any form of recreation~it look any form of recreation" data-pwa-dictionary-word="any form of recreation is looked" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">any form of recreation </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AE62B39ED75E23C55DABD13FCBAADB80" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I look any form of recreation~we look any form of recreation~it looks any form of recreation~they look any form of recreation~it look any form of recreation" data-pwa-dictionary-word="any form of recreation is looked" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is looked</pwa> for. Nowadays, some people opine that fictional books are more entertaining compared to visual pictures. However, the question arises, is the amusement created by reading novels or stories books outweighs that of movies?
In my Strong perspective, reading storybooks <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0DEE600DBA67304CB1FCB24AAC6AA02F" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_465" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="certainly " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">certainly </pwa>has an advantage over watching videos. My view <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3529571202AC05493D5418C25F384558" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is supported" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is supported</pwa> by a few noticeable reasons. To begin with, reading enhances the imagination of individuals as they portray the whole story in their mind while reading. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-62EBFF040C8A278E3EFF42A4CB57B2A9" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: The" data-pwa-suggestions="The" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Consequently, the" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Consequently, the</pwa> power of mind gets strengthened which <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-14492C59D53C7402E27CD3B0B76B1299" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_210" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in turn " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in turn </pwa>prompt people to understand and see the world from a different perspective.
Another benefit of perusing novels which undoubtedly makes it a preferable approach is the impact it makes for the education of students. Reading fictional books helps in improving the vocabulary of scholars <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-34FEEF39EEFC470037C7AA2DCDCC9C82" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3_1768" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: because of, for" data-pwa-suggestions="because of~for" data-pwa-dictionary-word="due to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">due to</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4E7AA0B2EB50C00AAFCAF1337F4F6ABC" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1753" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the presence of " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the presence of</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4E7AA0B2EB50C00AAFCAF1337F4F6ABC" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1753" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the presence of " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> </pwa>a wide variety of words. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-ACA2637B60E9977B5687D50FEC2171BA" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Grasping" data-pwa-suggestions="Grasping" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Moreover, grasping" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Moreover, grasping</pwa> new words ignites more confidence and makes people wiser. Also, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-187CA461A75E1EC5839709C5DE4A1573" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3_1768" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: because of, for" data-pwa-suggestions="because of~for" data-pwa-dictionary-word="due to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">due to</pwa> the availability of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C4239ABA5EB2DEF9BD29D1C4934B9378" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_PREP" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a various" data-pwa-dictionary-word="various" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">various</pwa> genre of books in the market, one can choose <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7451EEFD3DD693FD9C13E99BAA1B5EC4" data-pwa-rule-id="AFFORD_VBG" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="If this is used as a verb, it usually requires the infinitive: 'to accord'." data-pwa-suggestions="to accord" data-pwa-dictionary-word="according" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">according</pwa> to their interest.
My conjecture <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6F6DACF1C1837D46D367160558708A24" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is further bolstered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is further bolstered</pwa> upon by another unavoidable fact that reading makes people happy and helps in managing the stress which is not true <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2F29799DDDCB045EAD62A310F65A49B3" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_151" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: with" data-pwa-suggestions="with" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in the case of" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in the case of</pwa> movies. To illustrate my notion, a study by Harvard University pointed out that reading lowers the stress level up to 60 <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BB1A47660ABB794C3A426A436EE6A1F3" data-pwa-rule-id="GR_243" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="percent" data-pwa-dictionary-word="per cent" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">per cent</pwa> which is higher than most of the activities <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7B60708F91AD4DA4CD46C8518E72A86F" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2847" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="You might want to use a stronger verb" data-pwa-suggestions="enjoy" data-pwa-dictionary-word="like" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">like</pwa> walking or playing. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-82AFA243FFC2D1AF3E25416664433341" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: It" data-pwa-suggestions="It" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Furthermore, it" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Furthermore, it</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3C92D5EF5562D04393E6014B29AA8A5F" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is also believed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is also believed</pwa> that regular readers are more healthy and they sleep well.
To encapsulate, the above-stated reasons and my proposed example <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D622E6386F3ABBE3FCA940E8CC02036D" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_212" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="clearly " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">clearly </pwa>justify my belief that fictional books not only cater for rejuvenation but also <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D0F793C7737C5844541040137933C4B5" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3082" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: help cope" data-pwa-suggestions="help cope" data-pwa-dictionary-word="assists in coping" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">assists in coping</pwa> with various health hazards.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-12 | gursangeet | 11 | view |
- Reading fiction books, such as short stories and novels is more fun than watching motion pictures. Do you agree or disagree? 11
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- some people believe that the government should not spend too much money on outer space exploration. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- In today’s times internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion. 89
- The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 41.998997996 231% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 9504.0 1615.20841683 588% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 756.0 315.596192385 240% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.5714285714 5.12529762239 245% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.24361079503 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 14.248600133 2.80592935109 508% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 340.0 176.041082164 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449735449735 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2573.1 506.74238477 508% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.4 1.60771543086 211% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 344.895514757 49.4020404114 698% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 452.571428571 106.682146367 424% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0157309988618 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238499003746 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362268641627 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0147838999996 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00213317761068 0.056905535591 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.8 13.0946893788 426% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -117.34 50.2224549098 -234% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.6 11.3001002004 342% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 56.22 12.4159519038 453% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 234.0 78.4519038076 298% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 24.0 9.78957915832 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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