On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Mr. Eastwood,
I’m writing to you in order to inform that I’ve recently lost my smartphone, while I was on my trip to France. As you probably aware, I was the only one tourist who choose the most expansive price of the travel ticket, which covered lost items.
The model of my device is “Meizu M3 Note”, black color. Sorry to say, I don’t know it’s serial number. In case if you need it, I can call support service and ask them to figure out all information available about my phone.
Last place I saw my device was my hotel’s room. I think I left it in a middle drawer near my bed. It also could be on the cuisine table near a fridge. I used to charge it there and there was also wi-fi connection better.
If you able to find my cell phone, I will glad to take it back. There are a lot of my private data left and I don’t want to recover it. You can send me it on my home address that I used for my registration. In case you can’t find it, I would like to get a full refund of the phone’s price. You can return money to my credit card.
Thank you in advance for considering my situation.
Your sincere, Max Ololoev
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... situation. Your sincere, Max Ololoev
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214035087719 0.247107183377 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.150877192982 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561403508772 0.0946595960268 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0280701754386 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.168421052632 0.0437548338989 385% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0842105263158 0.122226691241 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0105263157895 0.0403226058552 26% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.53566796811 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385964912281 0.0326793684256 118% => OK
Particles: 0.00350877192982 0.00163938923432 214% => OK
Determiners: 0.0385964912281 0.0861772015684 45% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245614035088 0.021408717616 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00701754385965 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1188.0 1933.35771543 61% => OK
No of words: 222.0 316.048096192 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35135135135 6.12580529183 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20517956788 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.256756756757 0.374742101984 69% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171171171171 0.28420135186 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0990990990991 0.203846283523 49% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0810810810811 0.137316102897 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53566796811 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.037074148 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 65.0063168429 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 13.875 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0107403851 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 127.492653851 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.814263465372 38% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 30.9921171171 49.1944974215 63% => OK
Elegance: 0.888888888889 1.69124875643 53% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283605670775 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0869404971384 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0417951764145 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587931006719 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165367762605 0.148594505496 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105193454813 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695311879134 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196349374122 0.324371583561 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103720365607 0.0638462369009 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15252091916 0.228012699653 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101280516487 0.058150111329 174% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.