It is true that new development has had an influence on societies this has affected all local and large shopping Businesses in various ways and in my opinion, there is both positive and negative affect.
On the bright side, shopping malls could provide a large variety of products that people need. Chain stores like Walmart, for example; in this kind of stores people can find anything that they need, food supplies, home decoration, electronic gadget, clothes, and many other items so that it is saving time for customers which buy from this stores, in addition, It is bringing multiple jobs opportunity for local people with any abilities and skills that they have, like clerk desk, security, manager, cleaner, etc. It could be improving the living standard for people who live in the shopping center neighborhood.
On the negative side, a small business has always been destroyed by large and famous businesses in any community. Small supermarkets with a maximum range of products obviously never can compete with multi-brand stores in the same area and people usually prefer to choose the biggest market for shopping. On the other hand, a small shop is losing customers and after a while, they lose their income money. So that they have to shut down their business and it is being them a lot of financial problems like bank loans, children's tuition for school and college and family expenses.
In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of large shopping centers' development for people in their daily lives outweigh the drawbacks.
- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion 67
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...aving time for customers which buy from this stores, in addition, It is bringing mul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05078125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53490946411 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2655791464 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273988075093 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115878383557 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565569117936 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174246975525 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244830345657 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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