In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or small to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative developmant
In last centuries, everything has been starting changed. People always want to more easy way for everything because nobody has an enough time for shopping, eating or sleeping.
This changing also effective to all kind of shopping center.A lot of local shopping center owns have been starting closed at their business. The main reason of the closing is can’t following the network times. The local shopping center has a some advantage and disadvantage sides. First of all, if you want to buy something unique and different you should visit the local shopping center. And also, most local center near the district, which contain crowded community. Due this location is might be first choice for most people.
And the other side a lot of big malls are have been started opening. They have one handicap, which It is location. Most shopping center is establishment far from district. Therefore if you don’t have a vehicle, it’s not a good choice for you. But except location, this malls cheaper than small ones. For-why, one building is containing various small shop center therefore the price and range is ample. Also the big malls be able to give guarantee to their product, which is vital for customers.
However, it maybe difficult to say something net relevant situation. In my experience, it is positive developing for us.Time management, saving money ,taking guarantee and affordable price is vital. And people be able to have this ones with big shopping center. We should encourage the local centers to moving into to large shopping centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1640625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58093774121 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0555553915 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5789473684 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303133598002 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089732927991 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783365812744 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166775160982 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803270417125 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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