In recent years, there has been a considerable risen in crimes committed by young people in cities. what has caused this?what solutions can you suggest?
According to an expediting development rate that has increased between societies, the unprecedented crime records have appeared within young people. Before put a clear remedy forward in order to tackle with, I want to examine the prominent reasons of crime tendencies at first step.
There are two serious issues that need to be addressed, drug consumption and alcohol drink. Due to the fact that juveniles are tended to experience thriving events on the great deal, they do not take care about consequences so that being at the moment are they slogan. Additionally they have impressed by their peer groups, so peer pressure is an influencing element leads to juvenile delinquencies. They have included by self-pretending, for instance shop lifting and pick pocketing are two famous penalties which people have perpetrated while they were not on usual state.
To solve crime committed by young offenders not only the stricter rules and deterrent factors should be created, but the fine penalties in fair to crime have to impose on lower ages. On the other hand there is an essential responsibility on educational center to promote keenly awareness between juveniles in order to introducing a bench marking measure for crimes and their consequences on society. For instance what should accrue while people drive on drunk and to some extent the power of penalties is strong and deterrent.
A balance conclusion in my belief is alcohol and drugs, most are the privileged factors within juveniles that cause to boosting up crimes record and have amplified by peer pressures. It is to be considered, strict law and imposing justified fine besides improving awareness level would be helpful approaches to eradicate criminal tendency between young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...at being at the moment are they slogan. Additionally they have impressed by their peer group...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86134512395 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.6805606439 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101146407088 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376871860626 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353299714614 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063444417344 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413096041627 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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