Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people support that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, the rate of abortion is continuously on the rise and has become a debatable topic. Some people consider abortion to be made legal as they feel a choice should be given to them. Whereas, others consider it an outlaw as it is an equivalent of committing a homicide. I am of the opinion that abortion should be considered illegal as allowing the same would imply going against the nature’s law.
First and foremost, an abortion can be viewed as committing a murder. One is allowing to kill someone who has a right to live. Furthermore, allowing abortion would lead to dire in-consequences. The rise in rates of feticide would increase exponentially. People with every absurd reason would take part in it which would further lead to chaos. What is more, some communities are determined on having a baby boy rather than a girl, which would lead to a decrease in female numbers.
However, a couple deciding on an abortion feel that it is their choice to make. As the child is not yet born, the parents feel that they are not committing a crime. Further, due to various unforeseen reasons couples or single mothers arrive at such a decision. Reasons such as not enough support for raising the newborn, both financially and mentally. Couples are further not prepared to take up the responsibility as they might be too young and want to focus on their career and the incident might have been a mistake.
To conclude, it is my opinion that abortion to be viewed as illegal. Moreover, measures need to be taken by communities and government so as to reduce the chances of an unplanned pregnancy. Although the issue of abortion is highly debatable, further, an awareness need to be spread so that the number of such incidents reduces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'killing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: killing
...as committing a murder. One is allowing to kill someone who has a right to live. Furthe...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... be taken by communities and government so as to reduce the chances of an unplanned preg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, whereas, as to, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81063122924 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82034168408 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0261717116 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24440960536 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780173756902 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759302799947 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146145145773 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085089138052 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.