Nowadays the number of re-offenders are increasing gradually, the statistical reports are evident for re offending. There are plenty reasons for recommitting the crime for criminals. In this essay I will discuss all the possible reasons for re offending, will provide the feasible solutions to reduce the crime rate.
To begin with, most of the criminals are recommitting crimes to meet their basic needs. Poverty is the first and foremost reason for crimes, destitute took major portion in the crime ratio. If we see the statistics, the crime rate is more in the countries which are resides down poverty line. Second prominent factor is, these days our society is loosing moral values, they became more ravenous and greedy,ready to commit crimes to acquire more assets. They will not have fear towards our law for re offending. Finally, offenders are not embraced by our society, they always consider them as criminals though they are free from their verdict. So, criminals were unable find proper occupation for their survival,therefore they were back to illegal activities.
Some practical solutions needs to be implemented to reduce the rate of re-offending. Firstly, the government needs to allocate budget to eradicate poverty and give some soaps to the people to meet their both ends. The governing body should take measures to provide proper education and health to every individual citizen. Secondly, The authorities should make some amendments to the law, the verdict should be varies from offenders and re-offenders. Some draconian rules should be written for re-offenders. Finally, government should start rehabilitation centers for criminals. Where they can find some wage to earn their bread and butter. And, it should provide psychological counselling for the lawbreakers who are unfit.
To conclude, it is known fact that the re-offenders are increasing day by day due to various reasons as aforementioned. The government needs to take preventive measures to reduce it. And the perception of the society towards criminals should change, Once criminal is not a criminal always. They must give a chance to survive peacefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35798816568 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93209596077 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2859648917 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3181818182 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152139631729 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487731644557 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047724480361 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960202681391 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390980096949 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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