The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
First school for a new born is home and parents are the teachers. Both mother and father are equally responsible for the
upbringing of a child and making him/her the best citizen. In 21st century, where mother and father both are working generally does not get enough amount of time to spend with their kids.
The environment that parents create at home impacts child to a greater extent. Child's upbringing should responsibility should be taken care by both the parents as a happy family that spends time together gives productive environment for the children to learn and grow. If father works then mother can take care of teaching child at home. If both parents are working, they must accomodate their job timing in a way that each parent gets time to spend with the child. This way they are able to keep an eye on childs activity and emotions which might be triggered because of social messenger platforms or bullying by other kids.
The scenario where child responsibilities are owned by only one parent does not get to spend time with other parent, might cause social issues or discrepancy regarding parents in a child's mind. This might in some cases can result in pschychlogical or behavioural issues with the child.
Finally, the rearing of child is responsibility of both the parents and how they manage to fulfil these depends entirely on them like other aspects of life. If one is unable to devote time due to certain reasons, task falls to another parent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d father are equally responsible for the upbringing of a child and making him/her...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent for the children to learn and grow. If father works then mother can take care ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, so, then, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84980237154 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54793903252 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.385545468 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105722181867 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472351886507 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052513304071 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679851196975 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048134234808 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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