As a result of advances in medical care average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development. What are the advantages of an ageing population for individual and society
With advancement in medical science, the death rate has fallen apparently. As, a result of which the surging population is affecting a person and the nation enormously which would result in disastrous consequences.
No doubt, to live in an ideal society there is a need to meet the demands of over growing population.However, since past decades, medical healthcare amenities has made an imbalance and hike burden on government.As, elderly masses ought to be given perks to live in a sleek, in terms of pensions.Therefore,this is considered as an extravagant spending, which, in turn, affects the other development in the country.
Moreover, there might be chances where family suffers a lot because of non-affordable expenditures on the health care amenities of the vulnerable elderly masses.For instance if any family is struggling financially then how will it pay for the treatments.Therefore,In such extreme cases grey-haired people needs to support by the government.
On this stark contrary, ageing population has had experienced a lot outcomes of which they can inculcate to their juveniles.Consequently, youngsters need to understand the disparity between good and bad and will mould into sophisticated citizens.Besides, in such extreme cases grey-haired people needs to support by the government.
Conclusively, although old age society provides immense benefits to the adults yet I firmly believe that negative influence of hike in proportion of these people are still more than it’s effective results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42671009772 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13931204376 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1696847339 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241459810575 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663937061745 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514397139229 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10191337916 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469437794737 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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