What is the most efficient means of transportation when traveling long distance? Many would unanimously agree with traveling in a flight which is comfortable and time saving. However, due to the boom of tourism and a significant increase of travelers, there has been an increase in demand for additional flights. Although it may seem beneficial, it has serious repercussions on the environment. This essay shall analyze the problems and provide valuable solutions.
Firstly, fights run on petrol, which is the main contributor of air pollution. Increase in the number flights will accelerate the depletion of oil reserves which are already on the verge of becoming scare. For instance, according to a recently documented survey, the sale of fuel rose exponentially from 10% to 60%, with airlines being the major buyer. Therefore, if this trend continuous, oil will rapidly deplete and air pollution will be irreversible.
Secondly, various exquisite wildlife is found in the Arctic and Antarctic areas, which are unique and exclusive to that region. However, these areas also have access to huge amount of underground oil and fuel. If the number of flights increases, companies will be forced to exploit these areas to meet their fuel demand. For example, recently shell corporation wanted to set up a plant in the Arctic region to the rising demands of petrol. Threaten natural reserves to satisfy the growing demands for flight is very dangerous
This can be solved using two measures. First and foremost airlines should adopt environmental friendly and sustainable fuel. Similarly, airline companies should ensure that they are fully booked before flying or instead use a small plane if there are not too many people. Step by step if all airlines work collectively towards the common goal of saving the environment, the problem of air pollution and danger to exotic nature can be eradicated
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25986842105 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.840168611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0802493052 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0588235294 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192491748057 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518248644687 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052284852705 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104952844982 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441828774995 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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