It is true that, many industries face tough times when they have to appoint any employee. It is beleived that individuals who yearn more for monetary values are better workers. However, I disagree with the given statement, as they can lead the factory to loss by leaking information to rival company in search of more finances.
Firstly, such sort of approach will attract people who are not honest towards their employers that can raise trust issues among them. Moreover, these employees cannot be relied upon as they run after money and can go upto any extent to attain more of it. For instance, there is one popular incidence where someone handed over the ingredient recipe of Coca cola to their rivalry company. It was later found that individual was no other than the woker of Coca cola who fell in the trap for a hefty sum of money. Thus, such employees can posses greater danger for the integrity and privacy of the host company.
Adding further, rather than recruiting random people, the head of industry can show some inclination towards the individuals who are more passionate about the work. Such an employee can assist the company to attain greater heights. Because of their interest in the job, they will fell motivated and perform their duties sincerely. Furthermore, recruiter can also pay due attention to the experience that one hold before applying for the position. This will ensure that the person has enough knowledge and hands on skills to accomplish any task easily.
To conclude, instead of recruiting individuals who run after money, the entrepreneur should give an oppertunity to people who have passion for job. Such policies will greatly refine their recruitment process and will help them to appoint more trustworthy employees.
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, g 93
- Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resource, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, g 73
- You normally go shopping in the area where you live However you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved Write a letter to your local newspaper In your letter say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong wi 78
- Sales companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work What factors should be taken into consideration when recruiting staff for sales positions 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, for instance, sort of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02739726027 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5102436037 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7512890724 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213634240175 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688431554129 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474091033798 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138669612999 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470671992166 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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