Schools have the social responsibility to discourage children from eating junk food. Others think it is the parent’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern world, fast food has become an eating habit among children which poses many health risks. As such, some health experts believe that educational institutions play a pivotal role in preventing students from consuming processed food, while others argue that the parent should restrict their ward’s unhealthy eating habit. This essay discusses both the views in detail and states my opinion.
Since teachers are an inspiration for the young pupils, they are of great significance in creating awareness among the young ones about the negative impacts of junk food such as obesity and hypertension. For example, they can show posters and documentaries depicting the harmful effects of such food and also organise school excursions to farms and fields to impart knowledge about organic foods and vegetables. Moreover, school authorities have the responsibility of regulating the foods prepared in the canteen by replacing the oily foods with much healthier vegetables and fruits, thus contributing to the overall well-being of the pupils. Hence, learning centres are imperative in inculcating healthy diet patterns into the students as they spend a major amount of their time in school.
However, parents are the primary teachers and role models for their ward. The young ones usually tend to imitate what the elders do. Therefore, to introduce healthy food habits, parents should increase their intake of vegetables and fruits first. Furthermore, the caregivers should also prepare nutritious diets at home so that the wards are exposed to the nutrient-rich food from a tender age, which later gets inculcated into practice in their life. Therefore, parental guidance is crucial to the proper upbringing of their wards.
In conclusion, although mother and father have an important role in instilling their children with healthy eating habits, I believe that schools hold a major role in discouraging students from eating junk food through proper health education. This would have long-lasting benefits on the students, improving their physical and mental fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49221183801 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71352618332 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6676190408 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.928571429 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258048246465 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774687523041 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579715703679 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14773204589 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487601539578 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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