Scientist and technology experts are imperative to the development of contemporary society. some are of the opine that they hold a better position of respect within the society, compared to musicians and artist. I however disagree with the former statement, in the below paragraphs I shall explain my point of view with relevant examples.
on one hand, scientist are cramped within the premises of a lab, thereby, they are not exposed to they outside world to show off their research. Their research in indubitably pivotal to the modern society. However, their accomplishment are not brought forward as often to the public. consequently, public are unaware of their contributions to the society. For instance, 'Nikola Tesla' renowned scientist for his breakthrough innovation in the field of electricity. However, his work was not accepted, even after his death. It was in the early 19th century when his work was rediscovered, and he was awarded with the noble price 20 years after his death.
on the other hand, artist and musicians where always the center of the crowed from centuries. They had to portray their work for them to gain recognition, subsequently, they where always adored by the society. Furthermore, their popularity has gained them a lot of wealth. They are inundated by the attention they get by the public. To exemplify, 'Justin bieber' popular pop singer of the modern world, he gain enormous popularity from an early age. Became indispensable to the youth. Further fueling his success.
To conclude, scientists and technologist are vital to the future of society, however, they where always under-appreciated for their accomplishments. where as artist and musicians where adored for their art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26181818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00236821127 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3910485263 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1578947368 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855220817769 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309152534905 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432609885043 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630448919677 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031045921487 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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