Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment & we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives.Despite warnings, many people do not do this.What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an in

Researchers from every country have suggested to minimize the consumption of natural resources. Apparently, most of the people are still using them at the same pace. The plausible reasons and how we can motivate the consumers to opt for environment-friendly life will be discussed in the succeeding paragraphs.

It’s needless to say, the effect of global warming can be seen in every part of the globe. However, the government is taking a lot of initiatives to reduce its consumption but it is not only the duty of the authorities to save fossil fuel or energy but also the individual efforts and awareness which contribute to it. People of a conservative society never bother to think about this issue or plan for the future as they struggle every day to earn the basic needs of living. On the other hand, the pressure of modernization of affluent people likes to live in luxury and miss-utilize the availability of water, energy, food or natural resources. Therefore authorities should spend more on spreading awareness and levy high taxes on using products which are consuming energy directly or indirectly. Moreover, they should develop public transportation which is the cheapest, fastest and connects every part of the city. In addition to this authorities should put restrictions on having not more than two 4 wheels vehicle for the family comprising of 4 adults. And subsequently, prohibit the manufacturing of petrol or diesel cars and launch only electric cars.

A US scientist shared the recent survey conducted on ocean water that only 4% of the water on the earth is consumable therefore the United States has come up with the policy to install the water recycling plants at every residence. Moreover, they replaced the thermal power or hydropower system of electricity generation with Solar generators and windmills. Therefore Countries like India should also be following the same approach as the summers are longer and warmer so that we never face the issue of power cuts in any part of our country.

To recapitulate the above notion, saving of energy is the responsibility of individuals and the duty of ministry to provide the alternatives at a reasonable price. Only then we would be able to save the environment and gift a better life to our future generation.

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Average: 3.3 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: suggested minimizing
Researchers from every country have suggested to minimize the consumption of natural resources. A...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ter, energy, food or natural resources. Therefore authorities should spend more on spread...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... every part of the city. In addition to this authorities should put restrictions on ...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
...han two 4 wheels vehicle for the family comprising of 4 adults. And subsequently, prohibit th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...on with Solar generators and windmills. Therefore Countries like India should also be fol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07671957672 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01425395137 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1396703992 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9375 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174041093572 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520632133124 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460152429154 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107128389135 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524034684264 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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