Shopping is becoming a popular form pastime among young adults.
Why is that?
Do you think, they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
Nowadays spending leisure periods in the shopping centers buying things have become favorite among our younger generation. This has happened due to reasons like availability of entertainment activity in shopping centers, lack of spots for outdoor activities, and widespread consumerism. But we should energize our youngsters to take part in outdoor activities than spending time shopping.
Most of the shopping malls in our country contain large cinema theatre and food courts. These places have become a public gathering place, meeting place for people. As coming to those meeting place the primarily spend time buying things in the shopping centers. some of them may be mandatory needs, some are not. However, young people are spending several hours in shopping malls.
With unplanned urbanization, cities around the world have left a very small place that can be used as a place for outdoor activity, so people are now bound to enter in the shopping centers and buy products as a result.
Young people most likely to follow the latest fashion trend. This may happen due to peer pressure or due to their own freedom of choice. All the shopping center has the latest products of the trend and thereby young people end up in buying products.
However, it is highly unlikely that the young aged people are unmotivated to the change. They are the most susceptible part of the population that can accept change that we want. We can motivate them by taking steps which includes but not limited to being one, throwing open-air programs, two, opening sports academy, three, public parks. Most of all, we need to divert our younger generation to find happiness by helping other people, not in consumerism.
In conclusion, we can say that it is not the young people who are spending their times doing shopping, it's the condition of the society that leading them to do so. But it is a matter of hope that they can be motivated easily to do things that are helpful for society, nation, and for the whole universe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hering place, meeting place for people. As coming to those meeting place the prima...
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Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... buying things in the shopping centers. some of them may be mandatory needs, some ar...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hrowing open-air programs, two, opening sports academy, three, public parks. Most of a...
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Line 6, column 104, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...re spending their times doing shopping, its the condition of the society that leadi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94378698225 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50945657282 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6672815349 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200403595571 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623039098916 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432716427073 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100425516966 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448968289058 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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