Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people.
Why do you think is that?
Do you think they should be encouraged to do some useful activities in their free time?
It is commonly known that shopping is the most preferable activity among the vast majority of youth. This essay will explore the factors behind this approach and will detail why I believe that youngsters should be guided towards other beneficial hobbies.
To begin with, one vital reason why young people are obsessed by shopping is that they are usually tempted by the media. This is extremely influential because advertisements have become immensely creative and often performed by celebrities; causing adolescents to be attracted to purchase products that they might not need. For instance, a survey by BBC news has shown a record rise in the sales of products that are being advertised by famous figures; such as, football players, actors and. Another significant reason for this rise in popularity in terms of shopping is the fast growing development of products, particularly in the electronic field. Whereas teens are usually keen on the last updates of electronic devices, more shopping is being done by the individuals of this age category seeking the last versions of mobiles, laptops, tablets and other forms of electronic devices.
Nevertheless, I do believe that excessive shopping is an extremely unhealthy behavior and that some measures should be taken to motivate teenagers to participate in other useful activities. This is important because purchasing unnecessary good not only is a waste of money but also is a sort of addiction that needs to be managed. To make matter worse, the more the items owned by an individual, the less the appreciation they would have for these stuff. Accordingly, parents should encourage their youngsters to engage in sports which will provide them with enormous physical, mental and psychological merits. Moreover, volunteer work can be a prominent channel through which adolescents could acquire more appreciation to the world and possess wider horizons.
In conclusion, smart media and famous characters’ involvement in advertising are two obvious causes why young people are becoming fans of shopping. However, while many drawbacks might come with this trend, teens should be engaged in sports and volunteering to improve their skills on almost all levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39828080229 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89456716277 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607449856734 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1662479036 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190628472051 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601320450763 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411452066572 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105276802137 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297104695926 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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