Many people across the globe have develpoed an interest in shopping lately, making it a very popular activity especially amongst youngsters. This has been resulted mainly to escape the boredom and stress that these young generation face in their day to day life. In my opinion, the level of enjoyment one achieves in doing shopping outweights the cost of purchasing different products.
One of the most common reason for shopping is to relieve stress. Youngsters today have a really busy life, be it a student or an employee. So, to overcome the work or study load, shopping is usually preferred by most of these people. The advantage of shopping is, it do not need any prior planning, one can go anywhere and anytime according to their convinience. Also, nowadays they have mega malls where along with stores they offer services like entertainment and cafeteria. Such infrastructures helps people to spend their quality time in doing their favourite activity at a single place. Also, as these malls are huge people are often have to walk more which can prove to be beneficial. For instance, a study conducted by oxford university stated that majority of people going to malls have a healthy heart as they have to walk a lot around the mall as compared to people who prefer to stay at home.
On the other side, one of the concerning issue is financial crisis. Most of the clothes and other electronic gagets are quiet expensive risking young generation to fall in debt. In today's world, branded outfits are considerd to be a status symbols among young people, especially those worn by famous film stars and sports person. As youngsters blindly follows their faviourite star, they are keen to buy such styles clothes thar are really pricey. It is important for youngsters to understant their financial situation and a call for buying products accordingly.
In conclusion, shoppinh have a lot of advantages on overall health and mental status of an individual, however the negative side for the shoppers should not be neglected and shall be managed maturely.
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Suggestion: does
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9884057971 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66662570857 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0011090251 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14498954274 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467538545497 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386837545533 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859608809467 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358086925039 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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