Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults What do you think is the reason for this Is this a positive or negative development

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...ow days especially for the young adults.In olden days people were not much familia...
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...ty of the people mainly for th youngers.In this essay we will briefly discuss abou...
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...riefly discuss about the reason for that,impact of this on the otherhand as well. Fi...
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...o a popular activity during leisure time .For example, the young adults these days...
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...ards shopping mostly at their free time.Most probably youngstars pay attention in bu...
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...hich are just arrived to the stores. An another reson for the yougstars to get famiiar with s...
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...g is just the online shopping technology,which from when came into the conciration mad...
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...ty of goods at different range of price.Univesally thougt that online shopping is aniresti...
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... aniresting and smarter way of shopping.By this way it could besaid beneficial dev...
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...y it could besaid beneficial development Finally, young adults on the other hand...
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...fect of this ativity on the development.Younger adults in thier age will not have enoug...
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...urn into a negative reflection for them.Apart from this it also make adults to improv...
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...ection for them.Apart from this it also make adults to improve their online knowledg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, apart from, for example, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1103202847 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98258009023 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 93.0 20.2975951904 458% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.169944185 49.4020404114 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 478.666666667 106.682146367 449% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.6666666667 20.7667163134 451% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 7.06120827912 552% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344537281551 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234825227854 0.084324248473 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271614052576 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205508337549 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490870662438 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.5 13.0946893788 378% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.92 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 10.1190380762 387% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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