Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
historic buildings are one of the most precious heritage for people living there. those reflect their forefather’s lifestyle, culture, and beliefs. Whereas some people tend to build contemporary constructions by destroying historical ones, most of them support preserving them. I firmly believe that their originality and historic characteristics should be conserved.
The main reason is that preserving historic monuments would bring job opportunities and welfare. Since tourists eager to explore cultural and historical heritages, they generally prefer to visit historical places and structures. When they visit, they will need some needs such as booking hotel, eating food and buying some presents. For example, Hagia Sophia located in istanbul is one of the most attractive mosque in Turkey. it was built in 532 by Roman empire as a church and after the city was conquered by ottoman empire in 1453, it was changed as a mosque without destroyed anything. Every year millions of tourists come in istanbul from everywhere in the world to visit this mosque so that it is worthwhile for both Christians and Muslims in that it keeps continue its originality. that’s why there are many restaurants and hotels which has open for hundreds of years and those type of businesses are expanding in that area. I am sure that no one would visit this structure if ottoman empire would have been ruined it and build a new one.
Another reason is those old architectural buildings are more attractive. many adornments have been generally used on those and that makes them splendid. even nowadays, while little handmade products are valuable, huge and big monuments with those handmade products must be much more valuable. even if they handmade works try to be renovated they can lose their value. For example, Suleymaniye mosque has been build by architecture Sinan and it had an acoustic system inside the mosque and even a little sound can be heard but after that people tried to renovate something in that mosque and they ruined that acoustic system. after they tried to fix this problem but they could not. this experience taught me that historic buildings are irreplaceable and fragile, so people should protect them as much as they can do to respect their architecture.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that neither historic building should not be destroyed nor renovated without based on their originality. this is because, both those constructions are our tourists attraction places and we must respect their architectures’ achievements. there is no other place to live except the world, then, we should protect our heritages and leave them for our next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25348837209 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89346160591 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527906976744 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2283453885 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.681818182 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230746319558 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697149321295 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747282233331 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150305465949 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063033351763 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.