Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Opportune edification and good healthcare facilities are the two-determining factors which will impart to the country’s economic magnification. Albeit there are some denizens who believe that edification and medical care should be funded by the regime, others might have an opinion that the payment for the same is the sole responsibility of the community itself. This essay will argue that the regime of the country should be held responsible for ascertaining an enlightened and salubrious people.
To embark on, indubitably, access to inculcation is a rudimentary human right. Along with engendering political and gregarious vigilance it supplementally engenders employment opportunities. It should be the responsibility of the regime to make school inculcation free up to 18 years of age apart from this, enhearten the younger generation to pursue schooling. For example, according to the recent report Canada has 98% of literacy rate because of the free school edification provided to children. Moreover, the country’s administration can benefit the society by proving free health maintenance, by introducing health indemnification schemes. As a result, people will not fear to pay a sizably voluminous portion of their salary sumptuous treatments. A more salubrious society will contribute to the overall economic, political and gregarious enhancement of a nation For Instance, in UK people are issued with health cards which covers more than 50% of health auspice cost.
On the contrary, making inculcation and health care treatments free for all the people is not possible as it will not only put pressure on the regime to reserve lump sum amount of the budget but will withal put an encumbrance on the society as they will have to pay sizably voluminous taxes to the ministry. For example, in the USA the inculcation and medical facilities in not free, woefully, it pressurizes the society by paying extravagant price on inculcation and health. Supplementally, parents cannot afford to send their children to schools because of the skyrocketing fees. For example, In India, many people who are below the penuriousness line cannot send their children to school because of the high fees and neither can afford the extravagant treatment costs
To conclude, I vigorously accede in order to have a well-established and politically vigorous nation the management should make it a point to provide free edification and Medicare facilities to its society where not only the literacy rate is high but the people are living a fit and salubrious life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40399002494 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23474369446 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516209476309 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.975155514 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.785714286 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187645193408 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654310730968 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559904344783 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116637351922 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463793073311 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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