Single-parenting negatively affects children’s physical and mental development; therefore, should be discouraged. Do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
There are several effects of single-parent families on children's physical and mental development; therefore, it is essential to inhibit this family structure. First, the absence of the other parent will lose an opportunity for children to develop their physical ability. When being the only one earning a living, a single-parent might be too snowed under with work to spend time playing, teaching basic skills or helping kids with their homework. Besides each parent plays a vital role in children's development, so it seems that children in lone-parent families lack encouragement, support, etc from mom or dad to explore the world. Clearly, if children do not get enough care or attention normally required, it can hinder their physical development. Second, as far as I am concerned, children raised by single parents are at risk of psychological problems. Many researchers show that those growing up with only one parent absolutely go through many negative feelings such as a sense of loss, loneliness or depression. Consequently, they are much more vulnerable in terms of morals, then find it hard to build a good relationship with others. Lastly, there are some behavioral problems comes with mental impairments. Children might face discrimination because of their family background. It is common that when one puts up with a lot of annoying, criticisms, they are more likely to react aggressively, inappropriately to others or treat themselves badly such as abusing dope, alcohol, in the worst situation, suicide. In conclusion, lone-parenting should be discouraged so that children can live in dual-families, which foster their full potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...hers. Lastly, there are some behavioral problems comes with mental impairments. Children...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, lastly, second, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40310077519 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18406547362 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682170542636 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9360656934 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304635541976 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102553884886 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485821720133 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304635541976 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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