Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that, social media became a significant part of life’s. Although the personal information shared on social media is at risk, this has not stopped it from becoming popular among all age groups. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of social media.
To embark on, with regards to advantages, one of the prominent advantage is that it has made communication easier and cost-effective. Earlier we had to pay call charges, but with the invent of social media not only audio but we can also make video calls for free. For example, WhatsApp is mostly used by people to send instant messages, make audio/video calls to their acquaintances living across the globe. Secondly, social media has changed the way how the information can be shared within minutes with everyone around the world.
On the other hand, certain disadvantages of social media like risk of personal information being leaked cannot be ignored. The personal details which we enter during registration/signup to an app, can be hacked and used by unethical hackers to demand ransom from the individuals/institutions. Moreover, these people can also get access to our bank accounts through this information. There is also risk of children being exposed to adult content, cyber bullying on social websites. Excessive use of social media is also leading to social isolation among people.
In conclusion, as long as people are aware on how much information be shared on sites, advantages of social media like cost effective communication, sharing of information easier outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27058823529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16129028208 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0769230769 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389044201665 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151028981053 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118684372974 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259711964167 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100994876817 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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