You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Internet among different people has become popular recently. It is therefore argued by some that display of personal information on the internet poses a great risk. However, in my opinion, I believe that the benefits of the internet such as getting employment offer as well as far outweigh the drawbacks that accompanies it.
Admittedly, posting of personal details on the internet has a lot of risk attached to it such as kidnapping and armed robbery. Some people are fond of giving out personal details on the internet such as their daily activities, place of work, family details which allows these fraudsters to have access to their details thereby using it against them. Take for instance, Evans a notorious kidnapper arrested recently by the Nigerian police, was asked how he gets information about his captives and to the dismay of the public, he admitted that 90% of the information are gotten from the internet and this gives him the idea of the amount of ransom demanded from their families.
Nonetheless, even though demerits of internet usage abound, I believe that the benefits of the social media cannot be overemphasize. Recently, a close friend of mine got a well paid job with a multinational company through LinkedIn a popular Job site, also internet helps to keep up relationships while connecting lots of people with each other, friends and relatives reunited together with social media.
In conclusion, even though a lot of risks involved in using internet such as armed robbery and kidnap, however, the benefits of internet by its users far outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78149755148 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9496755296 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956474269775 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042940510744 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199532401277 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551564594113 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228142873488 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.