In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
Recently in certain parts of the US, adolescents are strictly forbidden hanging out without the supervision of at least one of their parents or other legal guardians. This kind of restriction, which is gaining enhancing support, is so-called ‘curfew’. From my perspective, this practice is reasonable and there are several compelling reasons why the teenagers must be accompanied by an adult rather than only conducting outdoor activities late at night all by themselves.
First and foremost, from the perspective of road traffic safety, there are indisputable benefits which result from this action. By stating this, I mean that those youngsters who are free to have fun outdoor might get seriously injured or even killed due to the exceed-speed driving or drunk driving in the late evening. Apart from the factors of dangerous driving actions, children sometimes may be too happy to forget paying attention to the road conditions. Under these circumstances, the chances are that they could easily get hurt by falling down or having ankle twisted. If merely one adult was present and providing the safety guard for them, it would have been less likely to be involved in a car accident or an accidental injury.
Furthermore, when it comes to considering the violent actions which are more likely to happen at night, the advantages of ‘curfew’ would not be overlooked. The serious crime, such as robberies, murders, as well as kidnappings could be committed without any obstacles when there is no adult on the spot since the adolescent are not capable of coping this situation in terms of mental and physical abilities.
Having examined the arguments in detail, I am convinced that the restriction alike should be applied when taking the factors of road safety and unexpected unlawful behaviors into consideration.
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- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, apart from, at least, i mean, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29692832765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05289673144 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655290102389 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9800856512 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246133657809 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847446664686 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747241862564 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137440600613 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957245083615 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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