In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
The US is struggling with the conditions that reached an impasse resulting imposition of law that does not allow youngsters to go outside during night hours without any elder for safety reasons. The essay will discuss the pros and cons of implementing such restrictions on the children and I would suggest more steps should be taken to make law liberal so that people can live a stress-free life.
The situation in the US become apparently worse after facing a voracious attack from Iraq countries. Due to some political issues, local people are in danger and especially teenagers are vulnerable to the crime because they are the future of the country. Curfew is imposed for the benefit of the public so that they can live life peacefully and escape from the deadly attack of crime like robbery, rape, kidnapping etc. Although nightlife become the lifestyle of many teenagers, nothing can be as precious as life.
Though today's generation is smart enough to tackle the problems, it is the responsibility of adults and government to secure their future in order to prevent them from indulge and also from becoming victims of violence.
On the other hand, curfew becomes an obstacle for teenagers because nightlife is quintessential to relax and refresh from routine work. It is not a welcoming idea to impose restrictions for many days as it hampers the freedom and children's actions. for instance, some years ago, due to implementation of curfew in one of the Asian countries results in struggle from their government that leads to adverse affect on society. No one wants a hostage life in their own house, so to prevent society for the aggressive nature of children government should adopt alternative measures instead of curfew.
To recapitulate, in order to protect the country sometime harsh law is only way but not always because occasionally it can cause damage as well. In my opinion, some other measure should be adopted rather than curfew like US should be alert for twenty hours and facilitate security surveillance all the time to protect teenagers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eople can live a stress-free life. The situation in the US become apparently w...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ng can be as precious as life. Though todays generation is smart enough to tackle th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...pers the freedom and childrens actions. for instance, some years ago, due to implem...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... their government that leads to adverse affect on society. No one wants a hostage life in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12827988338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75585625291 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574344023324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4887754404 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161124111002 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054861385088 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389539781007 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820120752441 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356905729714 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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