In some areas of the US, a «curfew» is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
In some parts of the us, after a certain time at night, teenagers are prevented to go out if they are not together with an adult. In my opinion, this rule could be more safety for adolescents and also relaxing for the parents. being outside at night times can be really dangerous in various way.
First of all, this rule would be very effective to keep teenagers in safe during the night. some places cannot be as trustworthy as the others so leaving alone a teenager in these places at night is really scaring for the parents. some researches show that the commitment an offense in darkness is more possible than daytime. In this situation, an adult knows well how to react, but a teenager does not so that would be helpful to accompany to your young children to protect them.
In addition, spending the night times with the parents would block the teenagers to not join in some illegal groups or a crime gang. At young ages, a friend group may be effective in a person’s character. For example, if your friends like to steal something you feel that you have to join them to not stay out of the group. this feeling can be really misleading for the teenagers who are in case of build a good character.
To sum up, the curfew which do not permit the teenagers stay outside during the night, is useful for both teenagers and the adults. being together with the teenager as an adult will keep them in safe. also, this rule will decrease the crime done from teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, well, for example, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58426966292 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38812729119 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531835205993 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8720788787 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355833255859 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124193208538 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784423130493 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22737299228 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758982678975 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.