Some believe that modern technology has made people less socially active, while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is an unavoidable fact that advancements of technology have brought various benefits as well as drawbacks. Although it is sometimes thought that usage of advents reduces socialisation, other people believe that it makes an individual socially active. In my opinion, modern technology has made communication and interaction much easier due to increased accessibility and ease.
On the one hand, some people believe that the introduction of various technological devices have made an individual active in society and I agree with this notion. In other words, modern technologies such as mobile phones, laptops, computers and the internet have connected the people from different states and countries and minimized the gap between the relations. This is because the network of communication has now become quite vast and it is easily accessible at each and every part of the world with minimal charges. For instance, according to a report generated by the Indian Telecommunication Department, there is an extreme surge in the facebook users from 5 years, owing to the ease of accessibility and usage to connect with the society.
On the other hand, it is often asserted that technical advances can lead to social inactivity. There is a substantial decline in the involvement of people in various social activities such as public gatherings, society events, get-togethers and healthy talks. As, people remain busy with their gadgets, playing video games or surfing websites, which, in turn, results in a decrease in their social contacts. For example, in past times people used to gather in public meetings and discuss the problems of society, however, nowadays there is a steep reduction in such activities which has caused a relationship gap between the families living in the same localities.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that communication has become far easier and convenient with the advancement of technology. Therefore, there some measures should be taken to make effective use of technical devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37888198758 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05933882229 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8901523833 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220848838416 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742019943243 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546790100954 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128437882592 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543174147443 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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