Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Aging is the one of the most critical factor in one's career, the ability of doing our routine activities, being committed towards work and willingness to accept responsibility decreases with increase in aging. This is a natural phenomenon, all humans need to accept it at some point of time. Many potray that people should be relieved from work when their retirement age shows up, whereas some argues that age is not the deciding factor and it is actually the individual's ability to strive hard even at their retirement age to support their family. I completely agree with the ones who are interested to work besides their age.
On the one hand, many people don't restrict themselves from working by showcasing their age, there are many factors which motivates old aged people to work. Firstly, Many old age workers are habitually health conscious, they know what has to be done to keep their body fit. Secondly, the improvement in advanced medical facilities enables them to get healed from their complications, for example, a knee replacement surgery can regain physical movements and they can walk as usual. Another stunning example is the invention of stent which replaces the blocked arteries in our heart which reduces risk of heart attacks. Besides age which is just a number. Finally, many individuals were passionate towards their work and their wish to get the joy of getting job satisfaction and continue supporting family should not be stopped with regards to aging.
On the other hand, some group of people wish to enjoy their retirement age with their family members as they are been running behind their job to pay for the family throughout their life. Few people may contain serious ailments which cannot be cured, for instance, many individual become very slow and inactive and hence they could not take much responsibilities towards work. Furthermore, many other people decide to enjoy each and every moment of their life by visiting various places and love being at home at the time of their retirement.
To conclude, there are many more advancements in place to make old aged people to regain their abilities and still can pursue their career rather than ignoring them from workplace due to aging. Besides these medical advancements, it is perfectly the individual's choice on how well they can plan to live at their retirement times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the one of the most critical factor in ones career, the ability of doing our routin...
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Line 1, column 461, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... deciding factor and it is actually the individuals ability to strive hard even at their re...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ir age. On the one hand, many people dont restrict themselves from working by sho...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... inactive and hence they could not take much responsibilities towards work. Furtherm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0306122449 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60591448358 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2010100921 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.466666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16375175258 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065633970328 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357930762749 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110131488408 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340232666546 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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