Now-a-days, uniform plays a vital role in human's life in companies and organisations. In following paragraphs I will portray both advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform at work.
As far as my views are concerned, there are many benefits for having a dress code. It establishes an atmosphere of discipline and uniformity. Inappropriate or dirty cloth should not be worn at work. If everyone is dressed to same standard, there will be no judgement about the employee on basis of there clothes. Dress code reduces the question among employees of clothes to wear as the clothes are fixed.
A dress code is also important in non-office environment, such as factories for keeping employees safe. For example, wearing tie in factory can create problem as it can stuck in machine and will risk the life. The same is true about wearing jewellery, sari, scarf etc. Therefore, dress code should be safe and should be presentable if client or visitors come at site. Proper dress code is applied at grocery store, restaurants etc to recognise them.
clothesrepresents the companies image. For example, a law firm has a dress code of white shirt, black coat and a black trouser which looks like professional.
On the other hand, it's boring to repeat same clothes every day. Some people find it uncomfortable to wear it as nylon clothes not suits everyone and feel allergic after wearing it.
To conclude, dress code is very essential at workplace. It's disadvantages are less than the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...in factory can create problem as it can stuck in machine and will risk the life. The ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Clothesrepresents
...re, restaurants etc to recognise them. clothesrepresents the companies image. For example, a law...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9443657725 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8869046828 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7777777778 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222983088466 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665951834514 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726690613941 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115454329043 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850607585495 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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