In some countries, children are expected to study more and more time both in and after school. Advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Modern parents often think that your children should study all time. It’s important than your children spend their time to play or go out with their friends. Personally, I disagree with this point of view.
In the industrial age of 4.0, many kind of machines and robot are producted to sever people’s daily life. This has lost the job opportunities of thousands people in the world.Therefore, many parent make their children learn all time to improve their knowledge because they think that only knowledge helps their children have a good job and a bright future. At the school, poor student in the class will be laughed by another student and their student and their parents will be decried by their children academic results and many parents always encourage their children to spend time to learn instead of spending time to play video game,watching tv or go out to play with their friends…
But they don’t know the price to pay if they force their children spend time to learn too much.
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| 2019-03-31 | bhatvishal@ | 61 | view |
| 2019-03-31 | bhatvishal@ | 61 | view |
| 2019-02-27 | minhhanhnguyen | 56 | view |
| 2019-02-27 | minhhanhnguyen | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... children spend time to learn too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57566326282 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.388338499 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119309457409 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690658370827 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394733303284 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941791761238 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286695716298 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.