In some countries, children are spending more and more time playing by themselves and less time playing with other children. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative developments?
Youngsters in few countries are enjoying mostly by themselves rather that spending leisure time with friends. As far as my opinion is concerned, I strongly feel that it is a negative development which is evident in their lifestyle.
Firstly, the reason behind less involvement with others is that there is least participation of parents in children’s life. Since most of the children these days are growing up in a nuclear family, parents hardly get any time to be with their wards. Both the guardians work hard to fulfil the family needs. This in turn, is making kids more of a private person and they are becoming hesitant in sharing their lives with others.
Secondly, social media and virtual world is also the main cause of this problem. One might argue that it is good to use social media for contacts, but on the contrary, children are getting uninterrupted time in virtual world and other unwarranted things that causes them to drift apart from normal life. Moreover, kids are also not being monitored making them distant from social life. Instead of having real friends, they count more on their virtual friends.
To overcome the above listed problems, some volunteer groups can be formed to take care of children. In addition to this, workshops can be conducted to help children overcome their shyness and make them participate in some recreational activities with their friends and families. The online activities, for which they spend maximum time should be monitored and a routine should be followed with more focus on offline activities. Grand-parents and cousin involvement will be much helpful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
...s involvement with others is that there is least participation of parents in children’s ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08270676692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64238383338 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6334275756 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263600213278 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810999115074 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660501481746 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157832003938 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473198534565 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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