Every person wants to earn handsome money and do not want any monitoring system on it. In a few countries, there is no upper limit for salary and some group of people believes that there should not be any maximum limit on salaries or wages. However, rest justified that there should be proper maximum and minimum limit on the amount people can earn. As per my understanding and opinion, I do support the idea that there should not be any governmental control on the earning.
Considering the case where the government regulate the earning of their citizen, there could be one reason for this policy is that the government want to eliminate the huge gap between poor and rich people. Despite the fact, one percent of people owning the 70% wealth of the entire world, because of this there should be proper control over the salaries. For an example, In Quba government had fixed the payment amount, and control the inflation rate by providing subsidy to every daily need items, but one cannot save enough amount to buy a house or even a mobile phone.
On the other hand, If there is no limit on salary, people can plan their future accordingly and invest their money wherever they want. There are many counties which do not provide free education, medical and subsidized transport system, therefore, people need saving so that they can send their children to good school and provide them proper medical treatment if needed. Thus, There should not be any control on the earnings.
To conclude, We all work for money and extraordinary work cannot be get by paying an ordinary salary., Therefore, government should not control the salary limit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86170212766 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41909737112 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0673982812 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319029303471 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123043173783 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082984240902 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180169559104 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070124722521 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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