In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days, so many people was attracted towards fast food because of taste and lack of time. But the most effective method for dealing this is to give awareness to the people and says how the health is valuable to them. Some people believe that the main health problems are occurring because of taking high quantity of fast foods. Implementation of taxes may decline the rate of eating fast foods and providing some type of awareness to the people may reduce the consumption of fast food. I completely agree and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, governments should apply taxes for unhealthy foods. Due to the lake of time and these type of foods are available at cheap cost with good taste will attract the people. For instance, one employee who completed his work and feeling so hungry. He does not have enough strength to cook. So, he think that eating fast food will reduce her hunger and it is also available at low cost. If the person continues this process daily then he finally faces some health issues.
Another reason, why I agree with taxes is this type of food causes so many health issues like gas trouble. The cost of fast food is cheap compared to the cost of fruits. By increasing of taxes so many people move toward healthy ones. Take a person as example, he need some food to eat. Here the both fast food and healthy food are available at same cost the person would prefer the healthy food. I strongly believe that major number of people wants to live healthy.
On the other hand, eating fast foods occasionally will give us a good feeling. As a result eat these type of foods rarely, when it seems to have a party or function.
In conclusion, although it is a common belief that the taste of fast foods attracts many people, but the health is main important. Personally, I think less eating of fast food will stay us away from diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r and it is also available at low cost. If the person continues this process daily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56764705882 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28067517169 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.207282635 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9523809524 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317683869742 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998572384969 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452504435676 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191784206287 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506985460711 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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